
What escapes us every day tires us
But, is it keeping me alive?
Eyes linger, mesmerised by stardust
What escapes us every day tires us
Warring feelings, which one to trust?
A headless dove clutters my design
What escapes us every day tires us
But, is it keeping you alive?
“NaPoWriMo Day 4: Today, let’s try writing triolets. A triolet is an eight-line poem. All the lines are in iambic tetramenter (for a total of eight syllables per line), and the first, fourth, and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines. This means that the poem begins and ends with the same couplet. Beyond this, there is a tight rhyme scheme (helped along by the repetition of lines) — ABaAabAB.”
This one was the hardest yet. I usually forgo structure for feeling or rawness. In this one, I had to remain in the box, so I aimed for the stars.
Art created using Dall-E.
You did such an amazing job with the structure. I absolutely love the format, but at the same time you kept your usual mystical/magical flow…that is true talent!!! You know I love the way your titles connect :)…this one is especially powerful. Amazingly done, my friend…can’t wait to see what’s next 🤍🤗
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Yes, keeping that was the hardest part in this. Glad you liked it, if you ever feel like something can be better feel free to let me know 🤍
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Aww that’s so kind Rahul…your writing always inspires me 🤍🤗
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Aim for the stars! Yes … you did it! What a feat!!
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Yay thank you 🙂
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You’re very talented and your writing is really thought provoking! I’m excited to see more posts from you ❤️
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Thank you so much Laila ❤ Please come back and read more 🙂
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