
The weight of my intelligence weighs on my stupidity
and I carry it like an exercise in style
but waiting for you to tell me
that sometimes intelligence is negligent
and some rawness of our mind is elegant
where nothing comes out of a filtered brain
and all you care is to get that weight off your shoulders
Decoding a painting with no shadows
I try to find myself in it
a commentary on the content
to make the soul content
Tell me sometimes we can be wrong
Sometimes being right is just a boring pathway
towards the stagnant mind
Tell me sometimes a little rebellion
is what we need and what we need to find
you smoke words. i eat them. i liked how rawness can be elegant, and also how nothing comes out of a filtered brain.
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Haha thank you! On to your blog to read your elegance.
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Been off my Game lately. Gulp, hope you can stomach the inelegant. Busy with other things
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It’s fine, you still write well. But once you write something immaculate according to your standards, do send a link across.
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Love the word play – incredibly witty. I found myself laughing aloud at how clever some of the lines are. xx
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Thank you so much 😀
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Your picture for the post says it all.and Yes you have to be rebellious in life, break and norms sometimes and follow your heart and be creative in your own way.
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